Tip Jar

I'm not sure I'm the best candidate to be giving writing advice but I'll try my best to explain my writing process tricks.

1. Leave room for mistakes by giving yourself multiple drafts to further improve on each time you revise.  The initial draft can be as mediocre as possible as long as you have every intention to keep increasing its quality.  Don't over think the first draft, but read the final copy thoroughly.
2. Brainstorm relative ideas and points of interest involved with your topic.  Write them down and decide how you can involve them in your paper.  Try to sort them out so that they occur in a relevant order.
3. Give yourself time to write.  Procrastination is a common vice and is a heavy negative factor in bad writing.  Begin your paper in your immediate free time and the quality of the writing will be much greater.
4. Bring a critic into the equation.  As many times as you read it you might not find all of the faults due to the lack of knowledge which led to the initial mistake.  Somebody with a good writing history and grammar skills is your ideal viewer.
5. Enjoy the piece.  The less tedious the writing seems the more passion you will have towards your work.  If possible pick a topic that interests you and if not then research it until you are able to write from a highly educated point on the matter.  Keep the writing interesting for you as well as the reader.

Fact or Fiction?

1. I have never been out of the United States.

2. I had a legal name change at one point in my life.

3. I have never broken a bone.

It's Always Sunny In Philadelphia

It's Always Sunny In Philadelphia is a show about four friends in their late twenties who own and run Paddy's Pub an Irish bar in Philadelphia.  The characters in the show are naive, arrogant, selfish and rude but that's what makes them so hilarious.  Charlie one of the part owners of the bar is an illiterate abortion survivor who frequently huffs glue, eats cat food, and drinks beer because "The combination of the three make him sick and tired and help him sleep despite the 500 howling cats outside his apartment".  Danny Devito plays the father of the twins in the gang, Dennis and Dee.  Mac the final main character and real life creator of the show is known for always wearing cut off shirts, believing he knows karate and making "Project Bad-Ass" tapes to show people how bad-ass he is.  The show has almost a cartoon vibe via the over-the-top actions of the characters which almost always end without consequence.  They are typically heavily drinking and always doing something completely stupid, but stupidity is always classic when it comes to comedy.  I encourage anyone who hasn't seen this show to watch it. I own seasons 1-4 and those are my favorites, but the new episodes are on Thursdays on FX at 11:00 pm. 
It's Always Sunny- Match.com Scene

OpEd

 Make Wall Street Risk It All
William D. Cohan
 The article is mainly concerning the serious flaws in Wall Street.  It discusses the "Dodd-Frank Act" which was recently signed by Obama, the issue with this act is that the incentives on Wall Street remain the same.  The concept of the rich get richer while the poor get poorer is truly bothering and yet this has been allowed for over 40 years.  A horrific example of this occurred in the office of Goldman Sachs.  In 2007 when the mortgage boomed, the three top executives split around 200 million dollars from the 17.6 billion that the company made in pretax profits.  The capital that the head honchos in this industry make is sickening and in this article it becomes much more apparent to any reader.  It suggests that each big firms security is backed by its top 100 execs, and that the financial stability will only be as true as the wealthy men running the company.  I completely agree with this though I doubt these greedy bastards would ever risk their own worth.

My Garbage

Believer Article 
The garbage that my friends and I produce is anything but responsible.  After nearly every weekend my house is littered with disposable cups and cans.  In fact we purchase paper plates to avoid dish duties.  I've always intended to recycle cans but never have, I don't exactly know why.  I typically buy bottled water or a to-go coffee if not both daily.  I think the believer article has changed my opinion, and I am going to try to use coffee mugs and water bottles from home rather than continuing to contribute to the already extensive garbage collection.  As well as starting a recycling bin at home.

Brewing...

I have chosen to write my paper on sustainable brewing.  Why is it important for local brewers to buy local ingredients?  How many breweries and wineries incorporate sustainability into their brewing?  Are there ethical ways of brewing?  Also how Missoula/Montana breweries have used their resources well in terms of ingredients and recycling. 

Atkins Diet

Bud Light Real Men of Genius- Carb Counter

Dr. Robert Atkins calls his low carbohydrate diet the revolution of American dieting.  After his book was published this diet became the in-thing for many Americans who saw an effective weight loss plan that allowed them to eat virtually as much meat and cheese as they wanted.  Leaving exercise in the dust, a new generation of carb counting dieters was born.

Atkins believed that fructose sugars and high carbohydrate meals was the cause of obesity in most people and put the blame on the governments food pyramid and its stress on consuming pasta, rice, and breads.  According to Dr. Atkins by eliminating carbohydrates, your body would get its energy by burning fat and calories.  Though this diet has shown results for the majority of the individuals who have practiced it, my question; is what else is it doing to your body?

Eating red meat and cheese is delicious and all but isn't cholesterol already one of the number one problems in Americans?  This lazy thought that you don't need to exercise as long as you don't eat carbohydrates sounds down right unhealthy to me.  I suppose there is a way to have low cholesterol and low carbohydrates through white meat and vegetables, but I feel that is rare among the Atkins followers.  Obesity is clearly an issue in America and if it’s getting people skinnier I'm for it, but I hope dieters make sure they're educated on what they are consuming and how it will affect their own body.

If you're going to do this diet try eating a grilled chicken salad on romaine lettuce.  Blue cheese dressing is low in carbohydrates and you can add most vegetables into the equation without cheating, but no croutons.  Breakfast is easy; you can cook eggs topped with a fresh vegetable salsa and some form of breakfast meat like sausage or bacon; just make sure you're conscious of the sodium content.  Snack on string cheese or pickles and you're set.  I personally wouldn't recommend this diet but who cares what I say, good luck.